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When two loves argue
Contributed by
fallen_eyes
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Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 07:47:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I dont know what i should feel
When two loves tear you in two
I can't leave either one
Yet i know soon i will have too
Do I make the choice of family
Or do i make the choice of man
I wish I knew what to do
When two loves tear you in two
What am i supposed to do
When my two loves argue
Theres nowhere to leave for
To escape this tormenting fued
they both grab at my heart
Breaking me at the seems
I wish i knew what to say
When two loves tear you in two
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Re: When two loves argue
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by ygraine_17 on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 10:27:44 AM AEST
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wow...this poem really hit me at the heart. My partner and my father has too been argueing...for the past four years and its breaking my spirits. The only thing that has kept me going is the advice a good friend gave me..."My father holds my past and my husband holds my future". Anyway this was well written with clear emotional distress breaking through. Love the lines, "Theres nowhere to leave for
To escape this tormenting fued
they both grab at my heart." Keep up the brillant work and I do hope that the issue at heart resolves very soon xoxox
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Re: When two loves argue
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by forever_lonely on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 06:23:05 PM AEST
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Hey tam
This is really touching, full of emotion which is why i love your writes so much its a tough choice but the right one is never far away:)
Great write hun
Love
Lukex |
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