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JUST ANOTHER STATISTIC
Contributed by
emystar
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Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 07:47:37 AM in AEST
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After love fell through,
wondering what to do.
Couldn't stick long enough
when going got rough.
Didn't stay there to see
wasn't good for you and me.
Walking past all pain
still feel rain.
Just another statistic left
laying on a court house shelf.
Soon waiting will be ore
no love forevermore.
Just another statistic left
laying on a court house shelf.
Severing all ties
suddenly realize
just another statistic left
laying on a court house shelf.
Never thought it would come
to living life alone.
Something happened, see?
No more you and me.
Thought it could last
couldn't get around past.
Soon papers make it final
severing ties and all.
Just another statistics left
laying on a court house shelf.
© Emy Star
29 Sept 2003
Ron 3/??/88
Copyright ©
emystar
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2004-01-29 07:47:37]
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Re: JUST ANOTHER STATISTIC
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by brandywyne on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 07:55:04 AM AEST
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| Id say u summed up the whole divorce process pretty well....good write!! |
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Re: JUST ANOTHER STATISTIC
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by 13Hopes on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 08:14:56 AM AEST
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My Friend,
I think that you have turned truth into words.
Cheers,
#13 |
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Re: JUST ANOTHER STATISTIC
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 08:36:07 AM AEST
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| True, true poem. You've expressed it well. |
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Re: JUST ANOTHER STATISTIC
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 10:08:36 AM AEST
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| AAWW kinda sad I thought,being lonely is tough. You'll be happy again someday! Great write.Christina |
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Re: JUST ANOTHER STATISTIC
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 03:28:57 PM AEST
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Brilliant Emy
Well done
Loved the heading the words fab to sounded like lyrics in a song
Excellent
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: JUST ANOTHER STATISTIC
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 08:28:19 PM AEST
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Oh how sad! Yeah divorce is a very terrible thing, when love ends its always a tragidy. I love the way you wrote this poem, very true "just another statistics left" How very true! Great write!
Anne :D |
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Re: JUST ANOTHER STATISTIC
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 11:46:51 PM AEST
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| theres always that point of no return reality, makes everything so surreal, time stands still, im so sorry you went through this, im always rooting for you emy girl, hugs, love nessa x |
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Re: JUST ANOTHER STATISTIC
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by Jazz on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 11:48:18 PM AEST
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I look back to yrs ago, when my mother and father were just anothe statistic case. It seems now-a-days, that love is all about that. Good poem, and so true...
Jazz |
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Re: JUST ANOTHER STATISTIC
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 04:22:06 PM AEST
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My turn to play catch up now..
You have expressed this so very well....
Hope all is well with you..
Hugs
Jenni
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