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Wish of Silence
Contributed by
Philophobia7
on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 06:20:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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There is no more happiness
Except in my world of disbelief
The reality I live
Is the creation of my wrongs
I bite my tongue
And pray for changes
From a God I don't follow
In a girl who's my last hope
I walk down the street
With only one thing on my mind
But with a constant drive
To do nothing but silence it
Yet all I know
And all I am
Will always still be there
And the silence will never come
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2004-01-29 06:20:13] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Wish of Silence
(User Rating: 1 ) by ygraine_17 on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 10:31:04 AM AEST (User
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the poem was really sad for me to read because at the moment I am nursing a broken heart and the line of the poem bring all that emotion back :(
But thats a good thing you bring out the emotions of the reader through your writing. Great imagery, paticularly the line," Is the creation of my wrongs." Keep up the great work xoxoxox |
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