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Logical
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 10:55:23 PM in AEST
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A book with blank pages
Is a book you cannot read
And a love that won't be given
Is a love you do not need.
A wind you cannot feel
Is a wind that will not blow
And a wound that doesn't heal
Will always let blood flow.
A pen without ink
Is a pen that will not write
And so a person with blind eyes
Cannot see our light
An eye without a tear
Is an eye that cannot cry
And so a bird that lacks wings
Is a bird that cannot fly.
A memory of you
Is a thought in the past
A love that is not ture
Is the love that did not last
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Re: Logical
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by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 11:46:36 PM AEST
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THAT WAS WRITTEN IN A DIFFERENT BUT GREAT WAY,I LIKED IT!
DAN!! |
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Re: Logical
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 12:08:15 AM AEST
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| an excellent poem, keep writing! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Logical
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by Mouth on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 12:11:13 AM AEST
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Great flow, love the words you used, and the way you used logic in all your detail. Love it.
Sarah |
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Re: Logical
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by EternitysLyre on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 12:48:15 AM AEST
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Logical? Exquisitely so.
"When sails are torn and hearts are broken, Life's a nightmare that can't be awoken."
~The Palatine Poet |
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Re: Logical
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by Disenchanted_Poet on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 01:06:40 AM AEST
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Very cool one. It seems so obvious yet until it is put into words, the logic is never seen. Very nice write. I enjoyed it very much.
Disenchanted |
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Re: Logical
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by forever_lonely on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 05:00:18 AM AEST
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Great write
The style and flow bring this poeem together and your choice of words pushes the logical sense forward brilliant
Luke |
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Re: Logical
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 11:18:08 PM AEST
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I hate all poems, well at least I used to.
good job |
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Re: Logical
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 11:37:23 PM AEST
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That was incredibly good.
'And a love that won't be given
Is a love you do not need.'
It is also a love that is not real and that can't be had. Very good write. |
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