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Winter Wonderland
Contributed by
monkey
on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 09:08:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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light
fluffy snow
drifts slowly
downward
until it touches
the earth
making a
smooth
white blanket
like a fantasy
everything is
perfectly still
as it
frozen in time
until
it erupts
with the noise
of excited children
Copyright ©
monkey
... [
2004-01-28 21:08:01]
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Re: Winter Wonderland
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 11:02:03 PM AEST
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| I only threw out a few words. The inspiration was there inside of you all the time. You know what? I LOVED your poem and I think writers block is gone. I only wished it were longer because it was quite good to read. Write another and another for it is inside of you. Kie |
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Re: Winter Wonderland
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by whisper-of-night on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 10:17:48 PM AEST
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| Where I am living now, yesterday for the first time since winter, it snows!!! Yeee-peee!! I was so happy! Have a great snow-ball fight with my mates! And this lovely poem just come at the right time! ^_^ |
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Re: Winter Wonderland
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 12:23:33 PM AEST
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| Very nice. Very sweet. Nice write. I think it still stays in your style. |
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