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Without You
Contributed by
night_child
on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 07:58:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Without you
I am nothing
I've cried so much
Sometimes I can't even cry
The sadness is too overwhelming
I've tried to move on
Oh God how I've tried
But I need you
I'm sorry for anything I've done
I'll love you for eternity
Even though I mean nothing to you
Please just let me die
I'm so alone
Without you
A looming darkness closes in on me
Tears stream down my face
The candle slowly burns away
As I fade into the dark
I have my whole life ahead of me
I have everything and nothing at the same time
Without you
So empty
So cold
There is nothing left for me
Without you
Copyright ©
night_child
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2004-01-28 19:58:44]
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Re: Without You
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by forever_lonely on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 08:08:06 PM AEST
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This was so beautiful full of emotion and so truely heartfelt, the poem itself was well written and had a beautiful flow to it
Great write keep it up, head and writings
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Re: Without You
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 08:19:48 PM AEST
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| I know it hurts, I do. Hang in there with the rest of us. |
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Re: Without You
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by CountryGirl on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 09:17:32 PM AEST
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| I know everyone says they know how you feel but everyone feels everything differently. I am glad you shared yours with us. You wrote it wonderfully. |
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Re: Without You
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by Nomie on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 08:02:29 AM AEST
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| I can so relate to this one. Pretty much all of my poems on here are about the love that i lost. This is a great write! I really liked it! |
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Re: Without You
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 01:43:08 PM AEST
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| I liked this. It was very powerful and I like how it was written. Nice job. |
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