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Revenge
Contributed by
Shadow
on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 07:03:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Ashes to ashes and Death to death
I’ll grind his bones till there’s nothing left!
I’m sick of this pain and all of the lies
Him or me tonight one dies!
He will not see the light of day
In the name of god he will pay!
His fate will be harsh and all may tell
I’ll smite him down and cast him to hell!
He touched the one woman I love
I mourn the death of my sweet little dove.
With tears in my eyes all I can say
I swear to go the devil will pay!
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Shadow
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2004-01-28 19:03:25] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Revenge
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 11:47:24 PM AEST (User
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Lots of anger in this poem. But you expressed it very well and your poem was in sync, a nice flow and you wrote a really good one. I await the next. Kie |
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