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on hold
Contributed by
Merry
on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 05:19:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
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_______________________
the catalyst of pain
caused the universal heartbreak
falling from grace
into abject poverty
relative obscurity
insanity dances on the bridge
don't slip, don't fall
she laughs out loud
too many adversaries
she's lost count of them all
blinded by her tears
cut off her ear
can't feel the wind blow
or see her own reflection anymore
two and twenty black birds
flew off with her last words
she'd give up her last breath
for a drink of forgiveness
if he'd hold the cup to her mouth
gmm2004
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Re: on hold
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by Letting_Go on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 08:25:32 PM AEST
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| Wow excellent imagination and imagry. Truely thoughtful words. Insanity it does lead me, your words and the feel of the poem. I commend you on a good piece of work. |
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Re: on hold
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 08:39:29 PM AEST
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I found this odd, but I liked it alot. Especially the 'drink of forgiveness' part that was rad. The imagery and everything else was amazing, but I'll shut up and quit raving.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: on hold
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 09:36:42 PM AEST
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| beautifully written expression, excellent images into soul, heart, one lost mind; but of those who have lived, we poets, ...have we not all been on the brink of madness? hugs n' love nessa |
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