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No Tears
Contributed by
shypoet_1986
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Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 10:34:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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It had not touched me till i was alone,
After leaving your face, leaving the phone.
Just how meaningless is a photograph,
It doesn't cry like you, it doesn't laugh.
The open lens cannot seem to capture,
The sight i see to take me to rapture,
Trapped, for now in a cell of emulsion
it must escape and feed my compulsion.
Fixated on you made me realise,
Theres more to a face than mouth, nose and eyes,
It is no feature, just evident to me,
This wonderous thing by the name of true beauty.
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2004-01-28 10:34:32]
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Re: No Tears
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by crLepley on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 10:48:13 AM AEST
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this poem is great. i dot usually like to comment on other peoples work because they are usually better than mine and i am "un-confient" about my writing but yours was too good not to tell you. thanks for the chance to read it.
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Re: No Tears
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by MissLee on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 11:08:39 AM AEST
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| wow, that was cool, I know exactly how you feel, the guy I love is away and I have a picture but its just not the same, good write you can private message me if you ever need someone to talk to, and don't be "un-confidant", your writing is GREAT! |
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Re: No Tears
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by brandywyne on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 01:30:03 PM AEST
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| all I can say is WOW its good very icely written. |
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Re: No Tears
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 12:56:41 AM AEST
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| Nicely done I would say. I think it was rather well written. |
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