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Contributed by
Disenchanted_Poet
on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 09:44:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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If I tell you my sweet nothings in your ear
I don't care or love you is what I fear
I would scream or whisper every word
But I don't think any of it would be heard
I would give you my everything and my all
The truth and meaning is what is written on the wall
You can change a big smile to a frown
I really thought I would never be let down
My heart, soul, and body you had claimed
My ignorance and stupidity for that I am ashamed
You were the first person that I had really cared for
I guess it was really deep and it went to the core
The pain inside was going to kill me
I needed a knife or something to set it free
The long nights that I had wept and cried
The feeling inside of you I guess has died
I thought you were prefect and one of a kind
You problems,lies and flaws is what I couldn't find
You were in my thoughts and in all my dreams
I still don't even know what any of this means
I remember when your lips touched mine
That was such a great and wonderful time
If you cared you wouldn't of hurt me so bad
I remember all the great times we had
I guess you weren't really meant to last
So, I guess our fun and relationship is in the past...
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2004-01-28 09:44:06]
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Re: Past
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by MissLee on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 11:12:26 AM AEST
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| Oh I am sorry, I hope everything turns out wel in the end dear, Keep up your writing though it is very good.;)hugs;) |
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Re: Past
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by brandywyne on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 04:55:45 PM AEST
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awesome poem..............good read
great use of words..need i say more??LOL |
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Re: Past
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 12:53:43 AM AEST
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| I could totally relate to this one all the way through. Nice write. I liked it a whole lot. It was very nicely done. |
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