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Shall we walk then...
Contributed by
phildel
on
Tuesday, 3rd September 2002 @ 09:23:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Shall we walk then,
In a place where people
Can still see us together.
Standing under the shimmer,
I can't promise you either
Everything, nor forever.
I love to walk with you,
Under the dew soaken leaves
Of a perfect summer eve,
To lace your eyes with love
To sow a perfect glove,
Made to fit you, for life,
May i be your wife?
Or if it's too much trouble for you,
Perhaps you'll ring me when,
I'm 22.
I'll be waiting still,
Beneath the window sill,
Right here beneath the infamous tree,
When once upon a time,
You kissed me...
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2002-09-03 09:23:16]
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Re: Shall we walk then...
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 09:39:41 AM AEST
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| Very nice , i like it , very romantic. |
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Re: Shall we walk then...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 09:31:28 PM AEST
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| This is a lovely poem. i just loved the imagery in this piece of writing. Good job! |
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