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Judgment

Contributed by drgnreborn on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 08:00:01 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

It doesn’t seem to matter
How fast I’ve run or well I’ve hid
My life is torn to tatters
For of my past, I can’t be rid

The ones I hold most dear
Our souls rooted together soundly
Though the person they love’s still here
Find their view effected profoundly

They will never again see me
As the person they once had
They no longer see me clearly
For through my past, the view is bad

Could the person they first saw be real?
Or does the past prove me fake?
The change towards me, I can feel
As my heart they now forsake

I know my punishment is well deserved
But is it ever going to end?
With it, my shame is preserved
Which doesn’t allow my soul to mend

All future hope is sucked away
Unless I look forward to being alone
No matter how much I pay
My past is still written in stone

Our sins will always be laid bare
For every eye to see
Of judgment day, we’re all aware
At GOD’s feet is where we’ll be

I don’t have to be patient
Or afraid of that day’s coming
My judgment’s in the present
Not upon my life’s closing

Copyright Â© drgnreborn ... [ 2004-01-28 08:00:01]
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Re: Judgment (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 08:05:21 AM AEST
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i really under stand this poem, infact there's not a bit that i don't. keep it up. you are very good!

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