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lost
Contributed by
loopylou
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Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 05:14:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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rushing free,crashing waterfall
emotins deep, does this explaine it all?
insecure and corroding away
a sheep from the flock that has strayed
pushing winds, steep cliff,
sharp rocks,
a new ship sailing from its very first dock
nervous and frayed
why do i feel this way?
dehydrated, stinging sand
lost in a desert land
does this explaine the way i am?
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loopylou
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2004-01-28 05:14:32]
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Re: lost
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by Rain on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 08:30:59 AM AEST
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i like. you've started my brain thinking but what of im not sure yet its a jumble as of this moment. you've confused me but also given me a since of understanding. quite exclent!
~blessed be~
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Re: lost
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by 13Hopes on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 08:56:41 AM AEST
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On the rare occaision the answer comes when we are lost and searching for a way...
Great Poem.
Cheers,
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