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Yes I Could
Contributed by
remy
on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 03:34:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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i know you
at least i did at one time
why does it happen?
these puzzles plague me again in my mind
should i call you?
it seems i've moved out of your taste
i can't remember
don't recall the meaning behind your face
i'm here the same
yes i know that things are different
nothing has changed
well i no i could be indifferent
here is the line
i've drawn myself behind a safeguard
what has it done?
there couldn't be anything this hard
do i exit again?
i always have found myself back inside
and as time goes
forget this part it should have died
i'm here as plain
yes i know that things are different
nothing to name
well i no i could be indifferent
as i'm thinking aloud as i'm dreaming to silent
it could be the proud in me making me violent
as i carry this sound as i let go of the feeling
the track record inside me feels so depleting
shove-off...
let go...
run away...
you know...
i'm here so vain
yes i know that things are different
nothing good came
well i no i could...
i could.
yes i could.
Copyright ©
remy
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2004-01-28 03:34:58]
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Re: Yes I Could
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by Rain on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 08:34:03 AM AEST
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i love this few poems really make me think and yours has.
~blessed be~
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Re: Yes I Could
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 05:04:47 PM AEST
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| sad but beautifully written..... |
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Re: Yes I Could
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 12:49:25 PM AEST
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| Interesting... I liked it. It sorta confused me though. I think I got lost in it. Ah well. I stil enjoyed this write. Nicely done. |
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