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I wish I could leave
Contributed by
Bohemian_with_a_pen
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Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 01:31:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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No1 talked to her much until I came along
She tried to do things right but they always ended up wrong
We became inseperable: the best of friends
We were so happy: we never wanted it to end
They still didnt acknowledge us, but we didnt care
We did everything together, life was suddenly fair
But then she got needy, I just wanted out
We fought all the time, all we did was shout
I got real depressed, I just wanted to die
She'd break down for no reason, lay there and cry
She went to a doctor, he sed it was something manic
He did more tests and found her as schizophrenic
Thats the day my life ended, though in fact it never did
No matter how I try, I'll be stuck here as a kid
I was never real, just a voice in her head
I'll never be alive, but I can never be dead...
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Re: I wish I could leave
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by monica109 on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 01:42:25 AM AEST
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| the essence of you "pen" is sensational! the emotion behind your love and the description made me be YOU! I love it this is a great poem! I will Bookmark this one |
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Re: I wish I could leave
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 02:16:38 AM AEST
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wow I loved the twist this was beautiful... I cannot say enough about yer talent that produced this messed-up, psychotic, gem. Totally stunning. *Prostrates himself before the poet*
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Re: I wish I could leave
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 03:59:02 AM AEST
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| Great poem although I found it a little sad. |
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Re: I wish I could leave
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by loopylou on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 05:19:00 AM AEST
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| wow this is a really clever poem, i liked it alot, thanks for sharing.... |
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Re: I wish I could leave
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by PsykoticDoll on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 09:49:20 PM AEST
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| Absolutely beautiful. Written from an amazing point of view. You must have a creative imagination to think to write from that perspective. Amazing! |
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