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Make This Feeling Go Away
Contributed by
Chanti
on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 01:06:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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What was I,
what was i to you,
a blinded girl,
who couldnt see the truth,
you said i was beautiful,
you said i was yours,
but just like everything else,
theres always something more,
struck by your arrow,
im wounded inside,
just take away my fire,
and leave me to die,
i hate it how i want you,
even though i realize,
that every word you told me,
everything was a lie,
so just dont say your sorry,
i hear it everyday,
just tell me it never happened,
just make the hurting go away.
Copyright ©
Chanti
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2004-01-28 01:06:06]
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Re: Make This Feeling Go Away
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by monica109 on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 01:36:48 AM AEST
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| this poem grasps my feelings about love's lost, the not wanting to hear sorry, the not wanting to love even though you know you must. Great job |
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Re: Make This Feeling Go Away
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 02:13:00 AM AEST
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I loved this very sad, very emotional, can relate to it in a way. I gave it a 5 since it appeared unworthy of the 3 one unartistic person gave it. Keep y er chin up.
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Re: Make This Feeling Go Away
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by loopylou on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 05:22:05 AM AEST
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| ahh ive felt like this too...i know it sucks. oi liked how strongly your emotion shines through in your poem...well done |
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Re: Make This Feeling Go Away
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 04:38:45 PM AEST
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Great show of emotions.... hang in there...
Jenni |
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