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Concrete Jungles
Contributed by
Joy
on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 12:07:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Under structures of cement
Lie the remains of days past.
Never to be seen again
Only heard about when asked.
Instinctively we replicate everything
we've seen.
And the universal minority is definitely green.
We yearn for open spaces so moving is devised.
The chaos closes in around us and yet we still
seem so surprised.
JOY FUTRELL
Copyright ©
Joy
... [
2004-01-28 00:07:05]
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Re: Concrete Jungles
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by RochelleLloyd on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 12:10:23 AM AEST
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| good write |
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Re: Concrete Jungles
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by MajesticPoet on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 12:50:09 AM AEST
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Good write. The first few lines made this one flow nicely. I agree we do seem to bury things until we are asked about them. Very good one. Keep up the good work.
MaJ |
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Re: Concrete Jungles
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 03:04:18 AM AEST
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well done
michelle |
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Re: Concrete Jungles
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by brandywyne on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 01:27:17 PM AEST
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| really good I understood it completly and I agree whole hearted. |
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