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True Love's Bite
Contributed by
monica109
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Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 12:05:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I know what I did can not be undone,
The fight is over and yet no one has won.
We both said things to hurt each other,
Now we have to hide lies under this horrid cover.
First loves first bite is always deep,
Only time can heal what has begun to seep.
No pain is to rough for me to over come,
Thats why I tell you this, so you can hear my
heart's drum.
But you and I are meant to be,
Even if you can not see our destiny.
I'll let you go as lovers should,
Just remember that when your life turns ugly,
When your misunderstood, I'll make that
foggy mist lovely.
So just remember that when your out there
and feeling bad,
My love is eternal, babe, isn't what you once
had!
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monica109
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2004-01-28 00:05:20]
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Re: True Love's Bite
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by RochelleLloyd on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 01:10:46 AM AEST
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For alot of us this is true.
Wonderfully written.
It's amazing what love developes into.
And it all starts from just being smitten. |
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Re: True Love's Bite
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by intelectualpoet on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 02:27:06 PM AEST
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Brazo.
You have summed up love in less than 20 lines.
I really enjoy your works, you're one of my favorites |
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