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Please
Contributed by
MaRyDoNtUwAnNa
on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 11:09:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Please take me away from here,
before I grab my gun.
Close my eyes and pull the trigger,
to let this world be done.
Please tear my barriers down,
so I can be free to fly.
Hold me tight and don't let go,
while I sit in my endless cry.
Please tell me I am special,
and no one can compare.
Please tell me I'm safe with you,
because you truely care.
Please life me from my hole,
filled with eternal sorrow.
Please help me see the light,
so I will see tomorrow.
Copyright ©
MaRyDoNtUwAnNa
... [
2004-01-27 23:09:54]
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Re: Please
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 11:20:40 PM AEST
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| This is so sad to read from such a beautiful soul as yours, life is truely a great adventure, and very much worth living, please take care of yourself, thanks for sharing this write, Val |
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Re: Please
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by Joy on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 12:22:50 AM AEST
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| Noone should have to go through life feeling as bad as you obviously do. Someone is causing this pain. You are strong .I can tell that by the way you write. God be with you. JOY |
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Re: Please
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 02:22:57 AM AEST
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this is sad I can relate to this a lot my heart goes out to you I know that m ay seem shallow, but it does. If u ever need to talk PM me... i hope u find that person.
Bobo (Joel) |
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