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Light Reflections
Contributed by
youlied
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Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 10:23:32 PM in AEST
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The smoke around me clears
Now I am alone
Innocence
No judgement passed
Here I can be found
Gazing toward the sky
The light is bright
In an empty dark field
The morning song is awaited
Apprehensively awaited
For with the grinning sun
Chaos takes over
Still calm on the edges
Hidden volcanoes erupt
Gloating happiness
Smothering pride
But now it is safe
Now I am safe
I wait for the smoke to clear
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2004-01-27 22:23:32]
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Re: Light Reflections
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 10:32:54 PM AEST
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| you really are good at poetry you know, another great one. xx |
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Re: Light Reflections
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by garyh on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 01:58:34 AM AEST
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| nice, well im pretty sure i know what you mean... good job |
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