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betrayed
Contributed by
lostinmyself
on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 10:00:37 PM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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If i could turn back time
i would not have cried these thousand tears
Over you.
i would stop all the lies and not say a word
To you.
i would distance myself to stop being hurt
By you.
you were my best friend, but now its goodbye
Thank you
If i could turn back time
i would not have turned my back
On myself
I would die but its easier to live
For myself.
you made me want to die..........
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2004-01-27 22:00:37]
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Re: betrayed
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by youlied on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 10:28:35 PM AEST
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| I love the way this is written...it really stands out. |
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Re: betrayed
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by LiveTheDream on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 01:47:36 PM AEST
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no one should ever want to make you die, i know cos i have been there myself. im so sorry this happened to you, dont worry it was obviously meant to be and you will find many other friends who care [like me ;) ]
nat xxxx |
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Re: betrayed
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by Chanti on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 05:16:36 PM AEST
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| Amazing write! To be betrayed by someone you trust is one of the hardest things... |
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