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Contributed by
lostinmyself
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Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 09:44:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I know weve been here a thousand times,
you run away and im left behind,
you dont seem to care how lost i am,
your lost in you own little world again.
I like me the way i am,
but you try to change be coz you think you can,
you do not seem to understand,
i do not want to be you
This is my declaration,
on my own i stand,
i will not go with you,
willingly hand in hand,
i dont want to be the same as you,
why dont you understand?
i am the black sheep,
theres nothing wrong with the way i am
i will never change,
not gonna follow a trend,
this is the end coz i will always be me........
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2004-01-27 21:44:05]
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Re: individual
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by Cristi on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 10:35:17 PM AEST
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| its good and i am totally next to you on where your coming from but when i am reading a poem when i see the word coz, and words like that, i don't take it as serious and professional as poems with out them. its a great poem, you just amy want to change that. Good! |
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Re: individual
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by LiveTheDream on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 01:45:05 PM AEST
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i love this one-how hard is it for some peopl to not understand that we want to be different, indeividual and not like them!!!!!it makes me so angry sometimes
Well expressed :)
natxxxx |
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