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hatred fills my mind
Contributed by
driping_blood
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Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 09:28:50 PM in AEST
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I want to slit my wrist so bad
But I promised you of all people that I wouldn’t
But I have to relieve this anger somehow
So maybe I should slit your wrist instead!!!
why didn’t you just tell me you didn’t like me
you gave me hope when you shouldn’t have
This pain you gave me
And the lies you told
You never liked me
and you shouldn’t have said otherwise
unless it was true
I liked you and thought I could have loved you
But you took that from me
and lied to me to the hole times
and if there was a chance, you just ruined it
don’t worry I haven’t forgotten your new boyfriend either
I can tie you both together cut you necks with one quick swipe
Watch you try to breathe as I watch you struggle for that last breath
You say he makes you laugh
and he talks to you every day
So what do we do every day?
Don’t I make you laugh?
Tell me the truth at least this time
Or is that too hard
I wish I could brake every promise I ever made to you
And shove them down your throat
while you choke
don’t worry its ok
I’m fine
i am pi**ed
you didn’t even have the courage to tell me yourself
I asked you and your always thinking about it
He asked and you leave the one you say you love
you don’t know what love is
Or you don’t care
Either way I don’t care
I can’t kill you but I can hate you
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Re: hatred fills my mind
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by driping_blood on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 09:42:42 PM AEST
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| sorry about the title i didnt really care what it was named and still dont just leave a comment if you want i dont expect her to leave one though she it probeble going to (have a long talk with me) like i care anymore anyways have a nice day ya thats it i dont have anything to say but i want to keep talking o well i will stop u got enough to read up there |
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Re: hatred fills my mind
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by Letting_Go on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 09:42:51 PM AEST
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| Tragic. Great angry poem here. God knows we can all get riled up. Take it easy. The hatred will ease although may never be gone. But you move on and they move on. Their life might not turn out pretty and then they will regret losing you which can be one of the worst punishments life can throw at you. |
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Re: hatred fills my mind
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 09:47:19 PM AEST
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this is great, ive felt this before......betrayl. its so angry. i really like this poem. i think you just described my life...
philxxx |
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Re: hatred fills my mind
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by driping_blood on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 09:49:15 PM AEST
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| i know but for now the hatred is still strong and i hope for it to leave soon |
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Re: hatred fills my mind
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 09:56:11 PM AEST
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| nobody likes to feel hatred. what i like most about this poem is that its very real. keep up the good work |
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Re: hatred fills my mind
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 01:18:04 AM AEST
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"But I have to relieve this anger somehow
So maybe I should slit your wrist instead!!!"
I love that! Awesome stuff!! Keep it coming, you express your anger very well.
~ Moonlit
Rage more! |
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Re: hatred fills my mind
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 10:56:59 AM AEST
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Actually I kinda like the title. I think this poem was rather well written. It carried itself rather well. Just walk away from her and don't let her have that talk with you. I have no issues breaking promises to betrayers as they would do you no better.
I think this poem was very well done. It was very easily related to as well. |
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