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Turned
Contributed by
krazed_AnGeL101
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Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 08:29:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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They glare at each other from across the room
A friendship turned to hate so soon
So much anger in just one little stare
No one else notices or could even care
They should have seen it coming from the very first day
Two fights in one year, the third put into play
Words have been passed, so many feelings let out
But still they burn with a hate so stout
Best friends turned enemies in just one night
Blind pain so thick it blocks out the light
Now they talk behind each other's back
Their fighting so intense, it makes the mirrors crack
They don't understand what caused all the hurt
Or why they can't just bury it all in the dirt
Their hearts ache thinking of what was lost
Why couldn't it just go away without such a high cost?
Their friendship is now no more than the past
But the anger and pain will always last
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2004-01-27 20:29:09]
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Re: Turned
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 08:33:43 PM AEST
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| excellent write...i hope u two will regain a friendship. |
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Re: Turned
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by Letting_Go on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 09:08:19 PM AEST
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| Graet write. I have been there exactly. Silent fights can be just as deadly. Nearly killed me totally. A years break from each other and we are trying to get it together but then they go and attack me. Not worth it I can say now. I would have never been able to say that even just 3 months ago. So good luck with this situation. You only live once and to make the most of it is up to you. So you need to make a decision and stick to it and so does your friend. If you two do decide to stick it out you both need to lay some ground rules. Maybe this is just a test to make you both stronger. Good luck. Good write. |
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Re: Turned
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by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 12:03:58 AM AEST
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SOUNDS LIKE YOU STILL CARE TO BE FRIENDS! REMEMBER FRIENDSHIP ONLY FADES AFTER SOMEONE DIES,SO OTHER THAN THAT IT COULD BE BROUGHT BACK TO LIFE!!NICE POEM!!!
DAN. |
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Re: Turned
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 10:29:46 AM AEST
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mmm, this hapened to me to!
katie told me it was over, but still she kept starting, then on monday she wasn't around, but that didn't stop her friends.... any way listern to me going on and on. i liked this because it reminded me of me and katie...! |
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