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One
Contributed by
Jacktripper
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Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 07:56:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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ONE
One will succeed One will fail
One will go to school One will go to jail
One can rule One can protest
One can be simple One can obsess
One would give everything
One would take anything
One would dance One would sing
One should do good One shouldn’t be bad
One should be happy One shouldn’t be sad
One could achieve One could dream
One could be polite One can be obscene
One wants this One wants that
One wants to be thin One wants to be fat
One loves to be loved One loves to be hated
One loves all the attention
One loves to be debated
One hopes for the worst
One hope’s for the best
One hopes for commitment One hopes for sex
One likes everyone One likes them self
One likes personality One like’s wealth
One wish’s to be rich
One wish’s to be famous
One wishes for a cure
One wishes to be nameless
One needs to be older
One needs to feel young
We all know One….
One for all…………………….…All for One
Copyright ©
Jacktripper
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2004-01-27 19:56:08]
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Re: One
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by youlied on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 10:47:54 PM AEST
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Re: One
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by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 12:24:30 AM AEST
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This poem is truly amazing !I really liked reading it,I already read it 3 times already...It does make you think...And the last line---it says it all,and still it contradicts the other side like all of your other lines.Very very good poem !!!!!!!I loved it !
PumpkinPie
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Re: One
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by poetrygodslove on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 10:57:53 AM AEST
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I FOUND MYSELF IN YOUR POEM LOL.... VERY CREATED... VERY TRUE.. I like how you write. able to read and understand not having to sit there and wonder. you keep me reading. or I got another line for you poem
one writes and you can understand, one writes and you cant lol..... sandy |
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Re: One
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 12:28:21 PM AEST
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"One would like to give one one" Billy Connolly
bob |
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Re: One
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 12:22:05 AM AEST
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Very good-n-that's lottsa ones.
Jus goes 2 show u it starta-n-ends with one.
Very creative!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: One
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by gery_giggles on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 09:55:30 PM AEST
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whoa....this made me think..good write..i liked^_^
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