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Love for Eternity
Contributed by
hawaii06
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Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 05:40:00 PM in AEST
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I know this may sound dumb,
But when I saw you, I knew,
That at that very moment,
We would be together forever.
I never believed in love at first sight,
That is until I met you.
I had many other boyfriends,
They were all jerks.
They said they loved me,
Then left me like dirt.
I was heart broken, but now,
Now it seems really different
I mean I think this love will last for eternity.
And it seems as though nothing will ever grow between us.
I know we may get into fights,
But we have to try to get through them.
And I know that we can get through this,
Because it was made to be like this.
Our love will hopefully last forever.
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2004-01-27 17:40:00]
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Re: Love for Eternity
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by forever_lonely on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 07:07:58 PM AEST
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Wow
What am amazing poem something i think we all hope for, i too didnt believe in love at first sight till i met my girlfriend, now i cant imagine a day gone by without her,
truely a great poem
all the best
Luke |
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Re: Love for Eternity
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 07:08:43 PM AEST
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| HAWAII THAT WAS A VERY GOOD POEM AND IM GLAD EVERYTHING IS GOING WELL FOR YOU YOU SOUND LIKE A NICE GIRL,GET WHAT YOU DESERVE.GOOD WRITE |
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Re: Love for Eternity
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 08:36:43 PM AEST
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| I always like to read about love & falling in love. I enjoyed your poem very much. I wish you happiness forever. Kie |
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Re: Love for Eternity
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by whisper-of-night on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 07:20:30 PM AEST
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| Awwww....... I always like the idea of Love in First Sight!!! This is so sweet! And it is nice when you finally met the right one! I wish you all the best!!! Love Forever!!! ^_^ |
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