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Life's pain.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 04:22:31 PM in AEST
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there's a great emtpy feeling,
from deep within,
almost like a microscopic monster,
has eaten all under my skin!
there's a pounding that thuds,
far inside my head,
as my brain cells are itching,
as they've gone a burning bright red!
there's a cold frozen feeling,
in my fingers and toes,
icy waters in my veins,
as my veins a water fountain hose!
and i guess the waters,
what's drowning my lungs and heart?
because there isn't any beats,
it feels like they've come apart!
it's cold and wet outside,
so i can't run out there,
but it's full of screeming and noise,
in this flat up here!
so where can i go?
to feed my pain?
or to give it some thing harsh,
to make it go away???
i don't know where to go,
to disappear from the world,
because every where i go,
there's some thing you've hurled!
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Re: Life's pain.
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by Necromant on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 04:52:49 PM AEST
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So sad, pain emanating.....Very well written the imagery is very good. Great write this is one of the best, I've read from you......keep it up!
Anne :D |
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Re: Life's pain.
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 10:10:25 PM AEST
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i agree with anne, this really is one of the best that ive read of yours. and i know how you feel too. you have nowhere to hide. i feel the same sometimes....
luv phil xxx |
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