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Fatal Decision
Contributed by
Solmyr1404
on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 03:42:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Well, it's finally happened,
Life's blown up in my face.
I don't know what I did,
But now I'm a disgrace
To my friends and family.
I wonder can there be
A solution?
Can I ease my pain
The same way as Kurt Kobain?
Could they find my body
Filled with more chemicals
Than Elvis' when they found him?
Or could I go slowly,
As blood drains from a slit artery,
And the room grow cold and dark?
Nothing's holding me here,
I've lost my fear
Of death.
Should I take my last breath
Now or should I live on miserably,
Hiding my life from you
And covering it with what you see.
Copyright ©
Solmyr1404
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2004-01-27 15:42:17]
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Re: Fatal Decision
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by Necromant on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 04:03:42 PM AEST
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Oh i loved this poem! Very well written. Sounds sure of your self. Heh Kobain pain hmm never thought of that rhyme, love Nirvana ....ahem on the poem Its really good! Great write, hope you're still alive to read this comment!
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Re: Fatal Decision
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 05:42:54 AM AEST
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Loved it. I know where you're coming from. Especially this line:
"Nothing's holding me here,
I've lost my fear
Of death..."
Said with great passion, my friend.
Truly,
-V.S.
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Re: Fatal Decision
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by MissLee on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 10:38:16 AM AEST
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| This was a good poem, but hang in there for me! I appreciate you! Hugs ;) |
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