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Of A Girl
Contributed by
movax
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Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:31:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When I was young
I did not have much fun,
Until along came this girl,
The apple of my eye.
For weeks we talked
Becoming good friends,
When she rejected me
I felt it was the end.
Everyday I still think of her,
Her beauty radiant in my mind,
Which poses the question,
Was she divine!
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movax
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2004-01-27 13:31:19]
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Re: Of A Girl
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by alecfernadez on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:35:55 PM AEST
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Great poem, your rhyming and rhytem is amazing, and the words stimulate emotions.
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Re: Of A Girl
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 12:29:43 AM AEST
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| I liked it. It was rather well written and I think it was easily relatable to. It showed the emotions rather well. |
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