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Before
Contributed by
ygraine_17
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Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:02:37 PM in AEST
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SadPoetry
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She trembles whilst she waits
For what has yet to be determined
Love, Lust or Pain
Sat in the middle of the past and present
A chance of pain of the choice of life
Trapped in this place
Love, Lost or Pain
Cannot choose the one I seek
The one that makes me forget to shake
To smile through the daze
To pick one now
Before the Love
Before the Lust
Before the Pain
Copyright ©
ygraine_17
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2004-01-27 13:02:37]
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Re: Before
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by alecfernadez on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:42:16 PM AEST
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Wow this rhyming and ryhtem scheme is brilliant, and the words are so sensual, sad, and dark at the same time, which kinda make your eyes pop outta your head.
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Re: Before
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by Necromant on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:46:14 PM AEST
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This poem is a bit unclear for me, It's written from personal experiance since it emanates great frustration. There has to be a choice and from what I could understand the choice made wasn't the one she wanted. Am I right? What an original style!
Anne :D |
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