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Pains Treasure
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 12:08:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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These wounds wont seem to heal
These pains seem all too real.
I continue to cry and wipe away my tears
I screamed away all of my fears.
Long lost words whisper slowly to me
Still pouring crimson regret and no one hears.
Still hollow inside, The pain will always see
Your hate towards me over these years.
Handed this great treasure
No strings attached or risk involved.
Showing it off with such pleasure
Never aware it may be dissolved.
With time you see there is a toll
To keep this treasure in good health;
You must not work too quick
To separate the youth from yourself.
Society, like a band of pirates
Steals your treasure and buries it.
To this loot there is one map
The one hidden deep within.
To be excluded once again
Left always to be by myself
How can I call them friends?
When I am left upon a shelf.
I always have nothing to do
And no one to do nothing with
Why can't people learn to be true?
Especially if kin or kith.
If you don't want me, just say so
I will leave if you give the word
Like an unloved puppy I will go
No need to say it twice..I heard!
If I smile and don't believe
Soon I will know it is all a dream.
Don't try to fix me, for I am not broken.
Don't act like you listen, when you hear not one word I have spoken.
I know pain can hear me
I can taste it in my tears
I know people, friends and foes dont understand the caused misery
I will continue to scream this tourture until no one hears!
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MajesticPoet
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2004-01-27 12:08:28]
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Re: Pains Treasure
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 03:20:16 PM AEST
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this is good, and i know where your comming from about the exclusion, i've been there,
it was only supposed to be 5 days only i wouldn't go back and it turned into 6 MONTHS!
SO YOU LIKE EVANESANCE... me to! |
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Re: Pains Treasure
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 12:05:12 AM AEST
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| This one was very very good Maj. I enjoyed every line. At first it echoed Evanescence. I loved this poem. It was incredible. |
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