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Sweet Lamb
Contributed by
andi
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Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 12:06:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You think me weak,
and ask me to be strong.
How can I do something
That in my nature is so wrong.
I do what I want
and act how I am.
No amount of words
Can change a sweet lamb.
I will always follow
Never lead.
And I am happy
I do not need.
Copyright ©
andi
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2004-01-27 12:06:01]
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Re: Sweet Lamb
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by alecfernadez on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:45:16 PM AEST
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This is a really good poem, it ryhmes wells, and it has a good flow to it. The last phrase in particular is good;
"I always Follow
Never lead
And I am happy
I Do not need"
I think that emphizises everything said in your poem, and its something I can to relate to, cos I'm always indecisive and I follow |
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Re: Sweet Lamb
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 11:58:42 PM AEST
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| Very interesting. It's good to do what you think is best most of the time... I just try to do it without hurting others... Sometimes it's good to be the way this poem spoke of. I enjoyed it and I like how it flowed. |
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