|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
IN MY SLUMBER
Contributed by
bhavnas
on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 08:33:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
|
yes , dream I just want to dream
in my slumber see , I want to
what with my eyes open I cannot.
Yes fly ,I just want to fly
In my slumber , I want to
Where with my eyes open I cannot.
Yes,be I just want to be with
With whom eyes wide open I cannot be
How so beautiful it seems
Flying I reach the zenith
There I see the place
To sit ;whom I want to be with.
Sitting together
He holds my hands
Heavenly I feel within.
The warmth gets me weakened.
Give me in this slumber
Just one moment
The moment I can cherish forever.
Copyright ©
bhavnas
... [
2004-01-27 08:33:02]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: IN MY SLUMBER
(User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 10:48:00 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Hmm yeah agree with you! very original style of writing! Great write!
Anne :D |
|
|
Re: IN MY SLUMBER
(User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 01:29:18 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| simply beautiful..well written..your flow is very nice.. venkat |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
