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Contributed by
texasw97
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Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 07:45:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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A few steps in front of me sits a hot flaming fire
I wish I had a genie so that her wish could be my desire
For the heat that she poses, I would like to cool down
I want to be like Rick Perry, you know to travel downtown
To the center of this volcano
So that I might be the one to trigger an eruption
I want to be the one that clears her sinuses like draino
For I am no good, looking for corruption
The metal frame that separates us is starting to melt
Heat so intense got me loosening up my belt
So that there won't be anything to slow down the flow of her lava
So that I might spray it with my sweet saliva
Yes the steam is now spreading throughout the air
The atmosphere is so foggy, got her putting down her hair
As the moisture from my breathe calms her down
I can't help but to stir up a frown
For this is all she wanted to do
No actions from my one-man crew
Had me all excited thinking I'm about to go on this great ride
Now I'm looking for somewhere to hide
For the heat that she once posed stills has me up
For she is cool now, having me stuck out like the doll name chuck
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Re: hot
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by Jacktripper on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 08:08:47 AM AEST
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| Women.... Can't live with them can't live without them... Great analogies genie-desire, rick perry-downtown they work in your episode. However you might want to stretch out the drama a little. What you have here is borderline music ...just cut the sentence structure down and this could be one hot song to sing. Well my friend good luck with the ladies... |
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Re: hot
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by Necromant on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 10:45:30 AM AEST
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Hmmm what a poem, very appropriate title! Amazing description, can't believe you've written this infront a coworker, heh lol.Great!
Anne :D |
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