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Tides That Bind The Wisher

Contributed by Exodus-On-Life on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 03:55:41 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Crystal tides surrounding, fighting the waves let be
Sand caught in our lashes, you're fighting against me

The Wisher crept as always
Closer until he could find
The tides that caught him lower
Broken are the chains that bind

Shades of the sunset, creeping along the lines of the trees
The bite of the cold, let go through the breeze

The Wisher crept as always
Farther along those lines
Mystical to a stranger
Bewildered as the lace of night intertwines

Moonlight shines upon us, dances on each blade of grass
We could play in forever, watch as the days continue to pass

The Wisher crept as always
Moving ever so constantly
Settled still for never
Distraught as the world settles beautifully

Morning could come as greatly, eyes close to the sun
I wish I could show you forever, let this wonder will be done

The Wisher creeps as always
Closer until he could find
Those tides that caught him lower
And those chains for which he broke the bind

Will you seek the wisher? His eyes of the deepest crystal blue
For I alone am the wisher, and the wisher longs for you




Copyright © Exodus-On-Life ... [ 2004-01-27 03:55:41]
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Re: Tides That Bind The Wisher (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 05:14:31 AM AEST
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Wow amazing breath taking poem!! Great writing! Beautiful, vivid imagery! Loved it!
Anne :D


Re: Tides That Bind The Wisher (User Rating: 1 )
by Jacktripper on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 08:23:35 AM AEST
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Very effective poetry... The Wisher creeps into your thoughts slowly... This poem is so close to perfection I can almost taste it. The imagery and the philosphy are exceptional. Just tie up some loose ends and tighten your write flow and this is in the books for press release. Your have a great talent going to defientley see what else you got cooking.


Re: Tides That Bind The Wisher (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 03:17:21 AM AEST
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Totally breathtaking .. I'm in awe of your work ... Jan




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