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What do U See
Contributed by
remi
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Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 03:44:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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What do u see
Sept 13, 03
When u look at me what do u see
What do u think I should be or ought be or do u even notice me at all maybe if my waist were slimmer would u notice me then if my face resembled what u see on tv would I be beautiful to u then If I care how good I look, to be so shallow and self-involved so u can be pleased.
Who are u to tell me how beautiful I'm supposed to be
Do u judge my full round body my very curving hips, my narrow eyes, my too small nose, my small funny lips, my unsexy voice, and my big feet
What do u see
When u look at me what do u see
Do u see my big and round face
Do u even see my heart that big as the mississippi river or how bright my spirit is or my soulfulness
Or my willingness to love that is big as the universe.
Do u even see me
Do u want to see me
Do I turn u off that badly
What do u see, tell me
Be my mirrior why can't I be the pretty all of them all
Why can't I be beautiful to you
Do you even want to see me at all
What do u see, When u see me
Remy Maskantinio
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remi
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Re: What do U See
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by texasw97 on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 07:55:18 AM AEST
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| man..that was tight..i love it..I have an answer to your question.."into your eyes"..nice work..i love it..Represent |
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Re: What do U See
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 11:26:38 PM AEST
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| NIce write. I've noticed people look right through each other just about no matter what. No one really sees the inner person. They just don't. Almost a crying shame sometimes. I think some people who get lots of attention would be avoided if it was seen. |
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