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Looking to the Light
Contributed by
faith_my_eyes
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Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:39:52 AM in AEST
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I find myself running down a tunnel of darkness,
blinded by my tears,
Not sure of where I am going or why.
I find myself falling, for my problems have finally caught up to me.
Defeated, I lay on the ground, the burdens of the world on my shoulders, sobbing with pity for others and myself.
I cry until I have no tears, just a whimpering is left, feeling very sorry for myself, and disgusted with the way I have been.
Then I hear a voice there above me saying,
"Its ok, precious child, you'll be fine, for someone cares. I do."
I stand up, dust myself off,
and go toward the light,
to face my problems and the world.
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Re: Looking to the Light
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:42:43 AM AEST
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| wow pretty good for a young writer good way to express yourself |
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Re: Looking to the Light
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 03:24:36 AM AEST
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Wow! U have been blessed with a god given talent and the more u glorify him the more joy
he brings.
It's remarkable that at the age 13 that u have such a personal relationship with God.
Most 13 year old has much more on their mind than God.
I'd like to see some of your new work 'cause I know that the talent gets stronger the more u submit to it.
Incredable work for a teen.
luv, huggs,
emy
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Re: Looking to the Light
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by Necromant on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 05:58:39 AM AEST
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Yay! I liked it, very inspirational! Good attitude! Great write! :D:D
Anne :) |
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Re: Looking to the Light
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 09:47:13 PM AEST
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He's always there to pick you up...
Take care.
David |
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Re: Looking to the Light
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by Lionel on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 03:18:45 PM AEST
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| Beautiful. It brought a tear to my eye. God Bless You. |
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