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why'd you let me go?
Contributed by
jlsldy1
on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:26:39 AM in AEST
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Why'd you let me go?
I heard you cry throughout the night
So, why'd you let me go?
You begged and pleaded for my life
I heard a man say it's too much
We have to let it go
Now, I don't know who "It" was
I know "it" was not me
I was forming very nicely
thought maybe I could even see!
This man said"if you breathe just right, the pain you'll never feel"
Did he not know I felt the pain?
did he really care?
to say goodbye mommy
would be alright
if I only knew, did "you" really let me go
did "you" really care?
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Re: why'd you let me go?
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:39:50 AM AEST
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| good write....sad.. but good |
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Re: why'd you let me go?
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:56:36 AM AEST
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very sad good write on a touchy subject.
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Re: why'd you let me go?
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 04:31:54 AM AEST
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I agree, very sad but u can find your healing by helping others see thru your writing.
Well done and very touching.
luv, huggs, healing,
emy |
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Re: why'd you let me go?
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by MariaXsoccerXrock on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 04:13:59 PM AEST
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| Great poem...very real |
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