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Mother Of Mine
Contributed by
Chanti
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Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:15:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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familiar face,
but no mother of mine,
shes empty, shes hollow,
she isnt coming back this time,
Her hands are always pulling me down,
always making me weaker,
till ive fallen to the ground,
always tying back these wings,
making sure that i cant soar,
denying me of everything,
so i cant be something more,
she kills me with her words,
as if i dont realize,
i see everything clearly now,
i see through all of her lies,
familiar face,
but no mother of mine,
shes empty, shes hollow,
she isnt coming back this time,
bring that person,
who for so long ive missed,
or was she never real,
did she ever exist,
did i just pretend,
that anyone cared,
when i look inside my heart,
it scares me that she isnt there.
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Chanti
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Re: Mother Of Mine
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:50:10 AM AEST
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| good write....you have a good talent...i wish the best for you |
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Re: Mother Of Mine
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 04:48:34 AM AEST
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Very sad but great writing!
I find it so sad that anyone's parent would treat their own flesh and blood this way.
Hang tuff.
peace, joy, luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Mother Of Mine
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 12:28:22 PM AEST
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| I had such a great bond with my mother this poem brought me to tears.Now shes passed & I regret some of the things I did & said years ago,I hope you can find it in your heart to forgive! Christina |
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Re: Mother Of Mine
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 10:28:54 PM AEST
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I liked this a lot the imagery was amazing. Loved stanzas 2 and 3, but the whole thing was well written. Keep it up.
Bobo (joel) |
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Re: Mother Of Mine
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by ammalu on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 03:33:31 AM AEST
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| Touching - So sad - mother shd. be otherwise - well narrated- keep it up. |
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