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Gangsta Poetry
Contributed by
DJ_The_Young_Grasshopper
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Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:08:21 AM in AEST
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Loser standing behind me in line
Decided to talk some ***** to pass the time
Wanted to be a bully
So I hit him with one knee
In the chest
Now he's bleeding internally
Should have worn a vest
Stupid punk, still think
You can kick my **s?
I'll toss you out a closed window
And cut you with the broken glass!
Looked at his friend
Said "You wanna test me?"
I got no problem capping you
With my M-16!
Yeah, I'm a soldier
Chairborne Infantry!
You should've known that
Before you decided to mess with me!
Now you're on the ground
Bleedin' and *****
You say you're sorry now
But I don't believe it
NOT FOR A SECOND!
Still want to mess with me? No-
I didn't think so!
Let that be your lesson learned
Mess with me-and you end up getting served.
Copyright ©
DJ_The_Young_Grasshopper
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2004-01-27 01:08:21]
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Re: Gangsta Poetry
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:37:00 AM AEST
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lol sounds like my school...but a very good write! Keep them coming
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Re: Gangsta Poetry
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 02:19:49 AM AEST
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Cute.
Well if they read this thy'll back off.
Very well said.
luv, hugs,
emy |
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Re: Gangsta Poetry
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by Necromant on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 05:37:01 AM AEST
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Oh Oh lol! Very good poem, hey if I meet you, I'll try to not make you angry lol! Great write! Liked it!
Anne ;) |
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Re: Gangsta Poetry
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 11:12:22 PM AEST
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| Yeah this reminds me a few fights. I try to avoid them now but it is soooo much fun. Keep on the anger. It does well to get it out... Ecspecially on someone elses face. |
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Re: Gangsta Poetry
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by DJ_The_Young_Grasshopper on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 01:59:13 PM AEST
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Wow! I'm #1!
I really am suprised that something I wrote during a bad day on a piece of scrap paper at the coffee shop inside a Borders Bookstore would get me over 700 reads. Thank you YPDC!!!!
BTW-of all my poems, what draws you guys to this one? |
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Re: Gangsta Poetry
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by KSUHO11 on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:48:05 PM AEST
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| I'm sure your a bad ass, because you really sound like one in your poem, a real soldier I'm sure. Sounds like a bunch of bull***** to me. I bet you drink alot of hard lemonade and smirnoff ice too, like all bad asses too. Awesome write. |
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Re: Gangsta Poetry
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by DJ_The_Young_Grasshopper on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:03:22 AM AEST
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Lol that's funny. And no, I drink beer. Used to drink Southern Comfort by the bottle, but had to stop after I got in a fight with it and lost a while back.
Almost 1200 reads! Woo-hoo! |
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Re: Gangsta Poetry
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by Seans_Girl on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 12:37:34 AM AEST
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| My boyfriend writes like that all the time. I think it is so funny. He was in a battle with this kid and this is what he said to him "Juggalo Clown P**** Faggot!!! Yep thats Jeremy Ward dirty little maggot, tryin to throw rhymes and thinkin he can battle me, but this where I lay the smack down G, They use ta call ya sandy cheeks, gettin sand in your bum bum, its time for din din Jedgie you better run run, oh nevermind you can walk, but ***** you shouldnt talk, remember you're a full-time bum, you dropped out of high school and you're livin in the slums, she described you as Funny,round, yet bumpy? Doesnt look like you're gettin any there Humpty, but maybe you can meet a juggelette at one of those faggot clown shows, one thats been passed around from clown to clown and blows coke up her nose, prolly the best catch for you, unless you try the zoo, but they aint got clowns there, i'm sorry life's just not fair, JuggaHO, hows that for closure, now its my turn to call you a ***** this battles over." |
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Re: Gangsta Poetry
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by frohemiasweetie on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 01:47:39 PM AEST
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| Alright Shawty, I think 50 Cent would pay top dollar for that. God knows he desperately needs a ghostwriter, or three. Love the testosterone and angst. Props |
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Re: Gangsta Poetry
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by SWAYLOS on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 03:39:42 PM AEST
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Re: Gangsta Poetry
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by emeraldeyes on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 12:23:18 PM AEST
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| Sweet! I would think so...I always liked the whole "thug" feel...You do a good job...you got INTELLIGENT thug feel. You make sense and your point is clear. And, can definately feel the anger. Keep writing. |
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Re: Gangsta Poetry
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by ChinaRivera on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 05:05:25 AM AEST
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I read this poem and was thinking: "This felt like a freestyle rap" A little buckwild and extremely hostile though. Its cool though, but I wonder 'why does a poem about hurting someone get so much praise! Is everybody in a daze? I write freestyles that are similar to this style, but not as violent. i mean 700 people read this! wow thats 700 people with negative influence! just what we need in the world today! Most of the violence in the world is because of influencial negativity!
Ooooow lemme write a little somethin somethin tooooo! ha!
Everybody must be in a freakin trance or a coma or layed back acting like a dunce like homer, cause this right here! it aint even cute! Lil youngin need to get kicked in the doot! "Throw em out the window and stab him with glass!" this idea aint nothin but trash! if you was my lil brotha! id kick ya *ss! Have you runnin to ya momma with my shoe stuck up ya *ss!
O K! im just kickin a little rhyme thats all!
"gangsta poetry"
whats next? "beatdown!"
oh and after that, how about "fist in face!"
wait a minute! "blackeye"
"bullet in yo moma"
"brawling youngins"
I could see the comments now:
1st comment: that was a nice poem. I mean, the way you described how the fist met the eye and then it turned black was right on point! yeah! keep up the good work! Nice write!
gimme a break!
My comment: mmm, I wonder if people have peanuts as brains.
;-) ;-) ;-)
I can't believe how many reads the bad stuff gets compared to the good stuff! what is this world coming to?
peace & love
may God bless all -China Rivera AkA Shorty jewlz
keep writing all. Hopefully somebody will direct their anger towards opposing whats wrong, instead of influencing it!
My mini Anger poem:
"I hate war! I hate killing! I hate hurting peoples feelings! I hate anything that hurts Gods children!"
We're all sisters and brothers
So replace pain with love for one another!"
ya likes? ;-)
-peace & love -China |
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Re: Gangsta Poetry
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by Alina on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 07:56:38 PM AEST
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I don't know if you're in a clique or not, but I have been, and basically I kind of think your poem is pathetic. Real G's got better things to worry about... mentiendes vato? But, I know you can write some good stuff so I'm looking forward to reading something new.
Alina |
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Re: Gangsta Poetry
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by Chanti on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 11:56:21 PM AEST
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| heh well you win some/ lose some... i didnt think it would be most read anything :P |
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Re: Gangsta Poetry
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by Dizza_13 on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 07:09:08 AM AEST
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wat the hell is this, this was the most read in
anger poetry? not only is this sick it is
completly unnecessary, there is nothing
"cute" or "awesome" about beating the *****
out of someone for the hell of it. Not only am i
disgusted by the poem the fact that so many
people have read it and commented on it is
appauling. Im sure you can write poetry well
but this was an example of a terrible poem.
id like to say im sorry but im really not, i dont
know if you actually think about doing things
like this but if you do you need help. People
that act like this are the trash of the earth
this angry and stupid behaviour is exactly
the type that has led to the world of terror we
now live in. |
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