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The Rain inside me
Contributed by
Disenchanted_Poet
on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 12:35:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
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As the clouds inside me rain
I can not help but feel pain
I try to find what is to gain
By keeping all straight and sane
The rain keeps falling, more and more
Inside my head I hear the roar
My body dropping to the floor
The tears, can not help but pour
The rain keeps coming, every day
The wind it makes my body sway
All the time, I pray and pray
"Will someone please take me away"
The rain keeps pouring, spewing down
There is enough for me to drown
The tears flow out my eyes of brown
My weeping is heard all over town
The rain keeps raining, no plotted rate
I guess I'm just lucky if this is fate
I don't know whether to love or to hate
I just wish I could go and clear my slate
The rain keeps flying, through the skies
I try to go back and truth my lies
But I was already given too many tries
The tears keep on rolling out my eyes
I do hope this rain will come to a halt
And let me stop drinking my liquor of malt
As I am not the one at fault
I just locked the truth up in my vault
The rain keeps slapping, on my head
It'll be so much easier when I'm dead
But the rest of my life I will be misled
Because all the lies remain unsaid
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2004-01-27 00:35:11]
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Re: The Rain inside me
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by MaRyDoNtUwAnNa on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 12:44:02 AM AEST
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I am very new on this sight but I can relate to you in many ways. I loved the poem, it made me cry just thinking of everything everyone goes through. Alot of people understand more that you think. Lovely poem
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Re: The Rain inside me
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by loveisendless on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 12:52:56 AM AEST
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I VOTED FIVE FOR THE SIMPLE FACT-IT'S ABOUT HOW WE ALL FEEL FROM TIME TO TIME,& THAT YOU WROTE IT STRAIGHT FROM YOUR HEART & INTO OURS!YOU HAVE A MAGICAL WAY WITH WORDS,SO KEEP WRITING FOR ALL OF US TO SEE!!
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Re: The Rain inside me
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by Disenchanted_Poet on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:07:26 AM AEST
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Wow. Thank you both for your comments. I am estatic to hear that my words touched people so much. I will continue to write and post on the site. I am still in awe at your comments. I really appreciate it..
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