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What Can I Do
Contributed by
JustJessica
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Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 09:47:16 PM in AEST
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WHAT CAN I DO
Your in my every thought
your in my every dream
and when I'm not with you
It makes me want to scream
Your the one that i want
the only one i need
maybe it's greed
maybe it's love
but i can't help thinking
you were sent from above
Maybe you love me
Maybe you don't
Maybe you feel the same
Maybe you won't
When I'm not with you
my heart starts to ache
and when I'm with you
my knees start to shake
What can i do
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JustJessica
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2004-01-26 21:47:16]
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Re: What Can I Do
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 12:15:40 AM AEST
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I really hope he loves you. Your heart speaks, its voice is heard here. Really good.
Take care, ok?
David |
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Re: What Can I Do
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by loveisendless on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 12:58:01 AM AEST
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NICELY PUT!IF YOU WROTE THAT FROM YOUR HEART,THEN IT HAS TO BE MADE OF GOLD!!LETS HOPE HE DOES FEEL THE SAME WAY,SO HE CAN HAVE A BIT OF HEAVEN TO HOLD!!!
DAN..... |
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Re: What Can I Do
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by Solmyr1404 on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:22:54 AM AEST
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| hey kid you've got some talent. keep it up. (oh, sorry if the "kid" offends you. it's just something i say. i know i hate it) |
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