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Rain
Contributed by
JustJessica
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Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 09:41:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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RAIN
I know who I am
And you can't change me
I know what I want
Even though it pains me
Through anothers eyes
I try to see
What other people will think of me
It's hard to tell what they truly feel
Because some of them have lost whats real
I look through your eyes
deep into your soul
And look for what you think you know
It's hard to see through so much pain
How can you feel with all this rain
Copyright ©
JustJessica
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2004-01-26 21:41:54]
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Re: Rain
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 12:05:14 AM AEST
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Good poem! Welcome to YPDC! Hope you like it here...
Take care.
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Re: Rain
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by MajesticPoet on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 12:26:09 AM AEST
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Good write... I like the flow of it. Welcome to YPDC and keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more of your works..
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Re: Rain
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 09:44:47 PM AEST
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This was beautiful and so touching. It reminds me of someone I know. I'm glad you joined. This brought tears to my eyes. I'll be watching for your stuff.
*Always hope and believe in your dreams, It helps you to cope with the trivial things*
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Re: Rain
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 09:47:32 PM AEST
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| didn't mean to post annonymously (above) it was me (harshreality) |
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