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I Hate
Contributed by
MaRyDoNtUwAnNa
on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 08:46:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I hate these voices deep in my head,
screaming and screaming for me to be dead.
I hate these roads when they twist and bend,
leading me to my deep and dark end.
I hate these thoughts that drift in my mind,
spinning and winding to an endless bind.
I hate the room where I sit and cry,
just hoping and wishing that I'll soon die.
I hate the razor that lies in my hand,
waiting for me to cause a blood band.
I hate the pain that does not come,
after the cut I just feel numb.
I hate my life and everything in it,
slowly fallin in my bottomless pit.
I hate everything as you can see,
I hate to hate because hate is me.
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MaRyDoNtUwAnNa
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2004-01-26 20:46:23]
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Re: I Hate
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by Esther on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 10:36:57 PM AEST
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Wow! That was extremely powerful! It was good too. If you really feel this way maybe you should get some help.
-Esther |
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Re: I Hate
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by Joy on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 11:55:35 PM AEST
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| Very powerful indeed!! I have to agree. I would definitly reach out to someone. Sounds like you have totally given up. Need someone just to listen? ok email me. JOY |
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Re: I Hate
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by misplaced_entity on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 04:56:52 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem, i really like the last line, it's so powerful! |
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Re: I Hate
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by misplaced_entity on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 04:57:22 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem, i really like the last line, it's so powerful! |
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