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Words Of Hate
Contributed by
Letting_Go
on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 07:09:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Strange how strage feels.
Popping pills down your throat.
The way your wound heals,
Even though you know you can't cope.
The wheel is turning,
But there is nothing left for you,
Finally you are learning,
Your futile life is through.
The garage door opens to an empty space,
Your eyes are coated with lies,
I can't see your face,
As you don't say your goodbyes.
Burning your name in the fire,
Your emptiness comsumes me.
And I too am a liar,
Something you've destined me to be.
Words of hate bury themselves in my head.
Eyes open to a whole new feeling.
Feelings of anger take over feeling dead.
My sanity you are stealing.
Everyday wondering where you are,
Not cause I miss you,
But cause of my scar,
I need to hurt you too.
Tangling this cord I stop the blood to my thumb,
I hate how I was ignored,
I hate what you and I have become.
Words of hate spill form my lips,
words of hate that are meant for you,
You're not here and fatally this knife slips,
And my own blood I drew.
Words of hate got me nowhere,
I sunk to my knees today,
God knows this is rare,
But I got down to pray.
Words of hatred curse that you don't ever come back here,
But I want my words to penetrate you.
Words I yell to the atmosphere,
They just come back to me like residue.
I hate you, I hate you,
You saw I hated myself,
And you then hated me too.
Words of hate I write,
While photographs hold the pain.
I hold in my sight,
My own turture I can entertain.
Copyright ©
Letting_Go
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2004-01-26 19:09:01]
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Re: Words Of Hate
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by shelby on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 07:21:33 PM AEST
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intense write here enjoyable
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Re: Words Of Hate
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by blueheart on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 10:09:09 PM AEST
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| Great poem, I loved it. |
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Re: Words Of Hate
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by mercedes on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 11:05:58 PM AEST
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| Good write, i look forward to seeing more. Welcome to the site. |
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Re: Words Of Hate
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by RochelleLloyd on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 11:19:48 PM AEST
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| great write |
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Re: Words Of Hate
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by Fairy on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 02:51:57 AM AEST
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| I know how you feel.. I hope you really don't cut and overdose.. I'm a little too familiar with that myself, and it's not something easy to go through.. know that people care and when doing things like that, you're hurting no one but yourself, which will get you no where.. yes it'll make you feel good at the time but you'll always have to come back down to reality... I hope things get better |
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Re: Words Of Hate
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by TearS on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 03:27:05 AM AEST
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| This bears your talent, no doubt on this piece that it's really a good piece of poetry..I really, really liked this piece...keep penning... |
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