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The pain within
Contributed by
SadnessPrevails
on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 05:40:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The sadness pools inside of me
Like nothing I've ever known
when your surrounded by others
How can you feel so alone
The world has turned her angry doors
And shunned me into the dark,
And yet the knife is sweet
As I make this tiny mark.
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Re: The pain within
(User Rating: 1 ) by ShadowDaughter on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 05:42:31 PM AEST (User
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Hey, I like this . . . a little short, but I love the vivid imagery. I'll be checking out more of your poetry in the future.
--Nora |
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Re: The pain within
(User Rating: 1 ) by pain_and_tears on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 05:59:08 PM AEST (User
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That was very interesting. I liked it. |
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Re: The pain within
(User Rating: 1 ) by Necromant on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 06:02:36 PM AEST (User
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I know what you mean, short and to the point the ones I prefere. The words transfer your pain. Great write! Never give up and write more!
Anne :D |
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Re: The pain within
(User Rating: 1 ) by Letting_Go on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 09:26:25 PM AEST (User
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Surrounded by others how can you feel so alone. Man I feel that way. Not so surrounded anymore though. But a few years back was surraounded by people and I felt so alone. Still feel alone but now with understanding cause I have no one surrounding me. Great write I enjoyed it muchly. |
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Re: The pain within
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 02:02:27 PM AEST (User
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great poem considering its so short! It said alot in few words. good job! i like it |
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Re: The pain within
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cathy on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 10:08:35 AM AEST (User
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I like this poem its very nice and short but its good i really dont know what to say but i liked it |
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