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Rainbow Thoughts
Contributed by
ShadowDaughter
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Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 05:32:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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silver-sweet the stars above
golden glimmers, whispered love
velvet darkness, black as coal
silver-gold is in my soul
gentle green the dewy lawn
amber in the nearing dawn
vibrant blue the churning sea
all are faded next to me
rainbow murmurs twist and twine
thinking thoughts that make me shine
all the colors in the skies
now must dwell within my eyes.
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ShadowDaughter
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2004-01-26 17:32:33]
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Re: Rainbow Thoughts
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by Necromant on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 05:50:58 PM AEST
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WoW Yay! Finaly a happy poem!! Loved it!!
Anne :D:D |
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Re: Rainbow Thoughts
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by Kie on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 06:00:42 PM AEST
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Words fail me.....
I have to tell you that this is now my favorite by you.
You shine when you write happy poems.
The flow, the rhyme, everything is in synch.
I commend you because you've out done yourself on this one. May you carry on! Kie |
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Re: Rainbow Thoughts
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by shelby on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 06:05:38 PM AEST
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pretty!!
michelle |
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Re: Rainbow Thoughts
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by limpingunicorn on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 06:33:21 PM AEST
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Yep - this is excellent.
The way you use the visual impact of colours is impressive, particularly when you use them to lead up to and underline your "radiance":
"all are faded next to me".
There is a genuine talent here. |
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Re: Rainbow Thoughts
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 08:29:17 PM AEST
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Must be something in the air today. :) This was a very pleasant read... calming. Well done!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Rainbow Thoughts
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 06:15:10 AM AEST
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Awww, Nora, I had no idea! I really like this one a lot, shows a side to your poetry that is beautiful, but neglected. Brought a smile to my face.
Truly,
-Dan |
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Re: Rainbow Thoughts
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 08:42:16 PM AEST
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| so sweetly inspiring, im so happy you shared this, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Rainbow Thoughts
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 06:46:40 PM AEST
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surely this must be the epitome of true beauty.. amazing poem..
x_x_x |
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Re: Rainbow Thoughts
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:49:43 PM AEST
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| WOW!!!! This is a great write. I loved it!!!!!!!! It's amazing how something hits us at the spir of the moment. Excellent work. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Rainbow Thoughts
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 06:15:58 PM AEST
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Well worked. Its short, but captures what it needs to.
Enjoyable read. |
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Re: Rainbow Thoughts
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:49:46 PM AEST
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Awesome, very nice.
Spazzo |
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