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My Suicide
Contributed by
ChriszBabiie1570
on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 04:11:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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from this sharpened blade
my veins try to hide
even tho scars start to fade
i'm still bleeding inside
People stare at me like im a freak
they think i am shy cuz my voice is meek.
but only if they knew how loud i could be
wen they realize the pain they enstowd on me
I can hear little voices inside my head
telling me screaming " you should be dead"
"Your invisible" they laugh and say
so ill kill my self leaving it that way
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2004-01-26 16:11:30]
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Re: My Suicide
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by pain_and_tears on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 06:05:31 PM AEST
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| I feel the same way!! |
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Re: My Suicide
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by whisper-of-night on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 12:05:02 AM AEST
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If I am you, I will be like this- so you look me down huh? Fine, I will just rise my head higher! You laughing at me huh? Tell you what, one day I'll achive something big and turn round laughing at you! Do you think I am invisible? Um cool! You are invisible to me too! Ha Why should I care about what others says! You don't appriciate the way I am, so what, I know there are people out there who does, see ya! ^_^
Well, I hope my point of view may give you some ideas! |
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Re: My Suicide
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by MaRyDoNtUwAnNa on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 12:51:41 AM AEST
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| I also know how you feel with this one. My veins also hide the scars of my life keep it up~*Amanda |
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