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I Hope You Don't Mind
Contributed by
aprillie
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Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 04:10:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I hope you don't mind that I've fallen for you
When I'm down I think of your face and it helps me through
You've hypnotized me with the words you've said
I play them back over again in my head
Only a smile from you can make my day
Even whem I'm at my lowest just you smile can make me stay
Whenever your near me you render me speechless
Leaving me only to dream and pray for a kiss
Who knew this was what I getting myself into
When you opened the window of me liking you
Everytime I see you my eahrt begins to race
I become weak when I see your shining face
Another night I drift to sleep because telling you this was something I didn't do
I wake in the morning with hope of me and you still there
None of this is anything new
I hope you don't mind that I've fallen for you
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aprillie
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2004-01-26 16:10:20]
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Re: I Hope You Don't Mind
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by waos on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 04:16:11 PM AEST
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i really like that. i so get what it says to cause there's this guy that i thought i fell for but ya, its fading because of reasons i dont need to mention.
whatever. so that was really nice to read. |
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Re: I Hope You Don't Mind
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by Necromant on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 04:38:00 PM AEST
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Wow great poem! the 'I hope you don't mind..' verse is really original! Amazing write!
Anne :D |
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Re: I Hope You Don't Mind
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 06:27:57 PM AEST
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| I really like your poetry...keep it up! |
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