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Your love
Contributed by
Necromant
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Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 02:19:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Looking at the photo album, seeing your face,
I remembered the first day I saw you, our first embrace,
You taught me how to love, left your signature on my heart,
I couldn’t get enough of you, couldn’t stand to be apart,
My love for you sang with the sweet melody your heart always played,
The nights spent together surpassed my wildest fantasies, my soul was enflamed,
But you left me staring, as you walked away, at your moving shadow,
As the darkness fed from the light, I remained waiting, feeling hollow
Desire that once was my source of happiness turned it into undiluted sickness,
Now only a treacherous memory remains, drowning in my sea of sadness
Copyright ©
Necromant
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2004-01-26 14:19:15]
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Re: Your love
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 02:39:25 PM AEST
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IF YOU'RE NOT A POET,THEN I'D LIKE TO
KNOW HOW IN THE HELL YOU WROTE THIS! WHO CARES WHAT OTHERS SAY,IT'S MAINLY JEALOUSY 90% OF THE TIME ANYWAY!! I THINK YOU DO A GREAT JOB WRITING,JUST FROM READING THIS ALONE!!! SO HOLD YOUR HEAD UP HIGH,& LET THE HEAVEN REFLECT OFF OF THE TRUTH IN YOUR EYES!!!!
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Re: Your love
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by Kie on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 03:23:44 PM AEST
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| Your poem is beautiful and so sad that it pulls at the heart strings. Well done- |
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Re: Your love
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 04:17:29 PM AEST
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| Reading this I return a couple of years ago when I experienced something very similar to what you've written... Very well expressed feelings, both love and sadness can be felt... Great work! Smiles and enjoy life! VanyaT |
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Re: Your love
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 06:16:28 PM AEST
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| Sad and touching yet love is so hard to find when you find it you never let go! Great write! Christina |
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Re: Your love
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by forever_lonely on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 06:34:34 PM AEST
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what an amazing write, im wlaways telling you your a great poet but you dont listen to me you are an amazing poet and your talent shined through with this write truely amazing
Luke |
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Re: Your love
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by CountryGirl on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 08:11:08 PM AEST
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| That was very nice. Not an ending you would expect. Good write. |
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Re: Your love
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:13:18 AM AEST
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"Desire that once was my source of happiness turned it into undiluted sickness,
Now only a treacherous memory remains, drowning in my sea of sadness"..
well wrapped..heart felt feelings exactly expressed ..well done.. venkat
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Re: Your love
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by whisper-of-night on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 09:24:55 AM AEST
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Oh boy oh boy, what can I say Anne? All these people they pinched the praises which I suppose to give! (err, hi everybody up there, I am not talking about you!^_^)
Oh well, don't need to feel sad, just think, once upon a time, you was in love with him, and there are this wonderful memory to keep, be happy of what you got! |
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Re: Your love
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 03:10:29 PM AEST
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it left me without words. really i dont know what to write except that i liked it
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Re: Your love
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by Mermaid on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 12:43:46 PM AEST
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| I really like this poem. You write a lot about lost love, but I hate peopls trying to be victims. Most people I know trying to be victims, hurt other people who loved them. Necromant, didnt someone ever love you and you refused his love ? 99.9% yes becoz I know lots of people crying about losing their love, when in fact they hurt the people who loved them, and the people who loved them usually offered them real love. I cannot understand this world. No offence necromant, just expressing myself. |
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Re: Your love
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 10:27:14 PM AEST
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| "But you left me staring, as you walked away, at your moving shadow," ...where can we go when we run so beaten? hang in there we are all afflicted:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Your love
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 09:16:26 PM AEST
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| Wow... This was filled with such a pain... I felt longing in it. Good write. |
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Re: Your love
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 04:15:46 PM AEST
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Wow you really have a nac for writing. I gotta tell you, you inspired me a little more to get over my ex- boyfriend, because others words encourage me. Now I feel less lonley than I did before, because I know there is better out ther. Thanks.
Brandi* |
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Re: Your love
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by faithmairee on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 09:32:31 AM AEST
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what a hauntingly beautiful poem...sad but so touching...i loved the part about his leaving his signature on your heart...this is what a call a great poem that was a real pleasure to read.
faith : ) |
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Re: Your love
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by arden on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 02:26:47 PM AEST
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this is so very sad... :(
lovely flow and use of words. just stunning. i loved this. well done. i look forward to more.
Arden |
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Re: Your love
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by emystar on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 09:37:28 PM AEST
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A masterpeice as I can certainly relate to these words in more than one way.
huggs,
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